Aquatic Dream

On the water,free
Adrift until the dawns first light
Sleeping on the sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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December 4, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Very cool
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December 4, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Hi Joe, I was immediately dropped on a boat with nothing to see but water and sky. Thank you for taking me from my office to a dream world where I momentarily felt at peace and relaxed. Please write and share more. Best wishes, JP
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