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Aquatic

Refreshing white flow, Spray disappear into great aquatic body Inspired by Raul Moreno-Rhythm of the falls contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 8:16:00 AM
Doris, Your haiku took me to Niagra Falls! Thank you for the beautiful memory. Good luck in Raul's contest. XOXOX.
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:24:00 AM
I have found a new writer to feast my eyes upon.... Nice descriptions in this as well as the other poems I have read today.......:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 5:20:00 AM
ever seen a fall that didn't have a pool at the bottom?
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:49:00 AM
This one is good also. I can't seem to get the gist here unless things go back to what they were or where they came from. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/7/2009 6:41:00 PM
I've read all your Haikus tonight and love them all. Good luck in the contest. Marty
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