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Aquatic

Refreshing white flow, Spray disappear into great aquatic body Inspired by Raul Moreno-Rhythm of the falls contest

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/9/2009 8:16:00 AM

Doris, Your haiku took me to Niagra Falls! Thank you for the beautiful memory. Good luck in Raul's contest. XOXOX.

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:24:00 AM

I have found a new writer to feast my eyes upon.... Nice descriptions in this as well as the other poems I have read today.......:JP]

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 5:20:00 AM

ever seen a fall that didn't have a pool at the bottom?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 2:49:00 AM

This one is good also. I can't seem to get the gist here unless things go back to what they were or where they came from. Keep writing. Mom

Marty Owens

Date: 10/7/2009 6:41:00 PM

I've read all your Haikus tonight and love them all. Good luck in the contest. Marty