Aquatic

Refreshing white flow,
   Spray disappear into great
     aquatic body



Inspired by Raul Moreno-Rhythm of the falls contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Doris, Your haiku took me to Niagra Falls! Thank you for the beautiful memory. Good luck in Raul's contest. XOXOX.
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 10:24 AM
I have found a new writer to feast my eyes upon.... Nice descriptions in this as well as the other poems I have read today.......:JP]
Culverhouse Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 5:20 AM
ever seen a fall that didn't have a pool at the bottom?
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 2:49 AM
This one is good also. I can't seem to get the gist here unless things go back to what they were or where they came from. Keep writing. Mom
Owens Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 6:41 PM
I've read all your Haikus tonight and love them all. Good luck in the contest. Marty
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