Aquatic

Walk by the water 
See the fish swimming along
Take joy in the moment

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Kelly Deschler

February 2, 2019 at 9:55 PM

This poem takes me back to a warm summer's day, which is such a nice vision to have in the middle of a very cold winter season ... Nicely done, Matthew!

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2019 at 9:41 PM

simple but nice. A soothing place to go!

M. L. Kiser

January 2, 2019 at 7:44 PM

Yes, in that single moment, be. Fish are always so peaceful to watch. Well penned.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 2, 2019 at 2:41 PM

This lovely haiku reminds me of Hawaii Matthew. We often see the dolphins leaping our of the water in joy! Happy New Year my friend! : ) xxoo

Nette Onclaud

January 2, 2019 at 7:55 AM

refreshing 'ku which delights me, matthew... good work!... huggs

Jan Allison

January 1, 2019 at 5:50 PM

Such beautiful imagery Matthew, a very pretty little poem. I am surrounded by the sea on our little Island, don't mind being on the shore but rarely see fish close by and i am not a boat fan lol:-) very best wishes for 2019:-) hugs Jan xx

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