Amy Green Poet Verse

Aquarius - of Course

I am 
Aquarius
We, ahead of our time
                 so I am told

Thinkers
Listless, obsessed
'Till all is perfected
                         so I am told.



Amy Green
4/20/2014
Aquarius, of course
For the THREADS OF SYLLABLES contest

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 4:05 AM Unique take on this one,,,beautiful poem n a merited win Amy ! congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta April 23, 2014 at 10:41 PM Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, Amy

Tim Smith April 23, 2014 at 7:06 PM Stopping back with a congratulatory hug!!

Nette Onclaud April 23, 2014 at 11:44 AM i like this for its poetic integrity, amy... sweet cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs

Verlena S. Walker April 23, 2014 at 10:26 AM Nice Amy... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2014 at 3:41 PM I really like how you used the name of the form as your theme. So cool that you are Aquarius. The peace lovers!!

Jan Allison April 20, 2014 at 2:22 PM Oh heck I'm Aquarius too! I need to check out the almond brownies and ginger flapjacks I made today see if they are perfect - may have to eat them all just to be certain lol hugs Jan

Tim Smith April 20, 2014 at 10:25 AM Ah the genius of the Aquarius has come out again ....lol

Paul Callus April 20, 2014 at 7:16 AM So I'm told... too .... me being another Aquarius! Like this read, but I think Dave is correct. // paul Paul Callus April 23, 2014 at 11:56 AM Back again.....congratulations!!:) // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta April 20, 2014 at 4:41 AM Nice take, quite to the point, Amy