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Aquarium Fish

aquarium fish
multicolor fins float forth
spellbinding calmness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Leiser Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Yes, you captured the feeling that I often feel when looking at aquarium fish! Great haiku! Good luck in the contest :)
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Thank you Laura. Appreciate your input.
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Very nice description of them. That is why they are used so often in doctor offices!
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:04 PM
So true. Thanks!
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:32 PM
- Love it, Susan - So tiny and cute ... but so colorful :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Thank you!
Roper Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:55 AM
the poem itself is so calming, Susan, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:02 PM
Thanks Eve. Appreciate your input.
Callus Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 8:56 AM
A lovely image, Susan, and like you I'm always struck by the calm atmosphere that an aquarium projects. ~ Regards // paul
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Yes so peaceful. Thank you for your kind words.
Pandit Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Lovely Haiku--colors of calm for the sight and mind..well crafted poem, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Thanks Vijay!
Canerdy Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:41 PM
Excellent, Susan! Janice
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 6:53 AM
Thanks Janice.
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:33 PM
So true how serene an aquarium is. Beautiful imagery, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Thanks Line! So kind of you.
Michael Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:18 PM
You can see it...hear it...almost touch it...great imagery...
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Thanks Arturo! You're always so kind.
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