Aquarium

The zoo
Is so crowded
Aquarium I choose
That is so nice

Fine, then.
My kids love it.
Fish are lovely creatures
We will have fun.

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Paul Callus

April 26, 2014 at 5:07 AM

Hi Ivo, I just love short poems like this. Simple message passed with ease. I've been to several zoos; the one that I like most is Whipsnade Zoo in England, open and not crowded. Aquariums are always fascinating. // paul

Ana Espinola Collins

April 20, 2014 at 11:19 PM

Short and sweet :) Ana

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 18, 2014 at 10:01 AM

I love how different this is...very very original!! I'd like tio visit the zoo where there isn't alot of people as well. This describes Houston, TX

Ivor Kos

April 18, 2014 at 12:13 PM

Wow! Houston, TX. Such an admirable location, I imagine. Thank you sir for commenting on this poem and "The Artist".

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2014 at 12:44 AM

a sweet little poem. I sure like your avatar too!!

Ivor Kos

April 18, 2014 at 12:13 PM

Thank you for your words on my poem and avatar! I hope my avatar annoys none. I know some adorable people who smoke yet I like to show off I don't smoke & I abhor being a passive smoker.

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