Aquarium

The zoo Is so crowded Aquarium I choose That is so nice Fine, then. My kids love it. Fish are lovely creatures We will have fun.

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/26/2014 5:07:00 AM

Hi Ivo, I just love short poems like this. Simple message passed with ease. I've been to several zoos; the one that I like most is Whipsnade Zoo in England, open and not crowded. Aquariums are always fascinating. // paul

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/20/2014 11:19:00 PM

Short and sweet :) Ana

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/18/2014 10:01:00 AM

I love how different this is...very very original!! I'd like tio visit the zoo where there isn't alot of people as well. This describes Houston, TX

Ivo Cos
Date: 4/18/2014 12:13:00 PM

Wow! Houston, TX. Such an admirable location, I imagine. Thank you sir for commenting on this poem and "The Artist".

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2014 12:44:00 AM

a sweet little poem. I sure like your avatar too!!

Ivo Cos
Date: 4/18/2014 12:13:00 PM

Thank you for your words on my poem and avatar! I hope my avatar annoys none. I know some adorable people who smoke yet I like to show off I don't smoke & I abhor being a passive smoker.