Aquarian Revelation

ocean spirit spray
reveals Posiedon's glory
speaking from the depths
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:44 AM
I enjoyed reading your Haiku this morning Abe. Have a wonderful weekend and keep the ink flowing. Love, Carol
Bilyeu Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:30 AM
love your use of greek mythology mr. L!!! Great haiku!!!
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:54 PM
A wonderful write with good images
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April 22, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Really enjoy the mythological reference in this haiku, Abe. Poseidon's presence in the poem gives the reader an interesting perspective on the ocean spray. Love, Carolyn
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