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Aqua Tears

One golden sunrise
The ocean cried quiet foam.
Remembering war…

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Poetic Form: Haiku

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Caryl Muzzey

March 10, 2010 at 8:59 AM

A beautifulful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2010 at 2:03 PM

So sad, Dane Ann, but beautifully written. Quite moving! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

February 17, 2010 at 1:18 AM

Congrats on your success Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words.

Robert A. Dufresne

February 16, 2010 at 5:21 PM

Congratulations on you HM. Dane Ann! Thanks for your comments. -Robert

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 16, 2010 at 5:31 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Dane Ann. Love,Carol

Audrey Haick

February 15, 2010 at 8:15 PM

Dear Dane Ann, My congratulations on your win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest! Great work. Thanks also for your kind comments. Peace, love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 15, 2010 at 3:12 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write and a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

February 15, 2010 at 2:24 PM

DASJ, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Susan Palli

February 14, 2010 at 9:26 AM

another good one!

Marty Owens

February 13, 2010 at 6:59 PM

Beautiful Haiku Dane Ann..love it...Marty...P.S. I've posted another end-line poem...a senryu "True Love"

Sara Kendrick

February 13, 2010 at 4:26 PM

Beautiful and sad at the same time. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

February 13, 2010 at 2:41 PM

hmmmmm pause for much thought! Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock

February 13, 2010 at 1:01 PM

War always comes at a great cost. God Bless Phyl

February 13, 2010 at 12:50 PM

Though provoking poem with an interesting twist at the end. Reminds one of the cost. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

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