Aqua Tears

One golden sunrise The ocean cried quiet foam. Remembering war… © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poetic Form: Haiku

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Date: 3/10/2010 8:59:00 AM

A beautifulful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

Date: 2/17/2010 2:03:00 PM

So sad, Dane Ann, but beautifully written. Quite moving! Love, Carolyn

Date: 2/17/2010 1:18:00 AM

Congrats on your success Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words.

Date: 2/16/2010 5:21:00 PM

Congratulations on you HM. Dane Ann! Thanks for your comments. -Robert

Date: 2/16/2010 5:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Dane Ann. Love,Carol

Date: 2/15/2010 8:15:00 PM

Dear Dane Ann, My congratulations on your win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest! Great work. Thanks also for your kind comments. Peace, love, Audrey

Date: 2/15/2010 3:12:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write and a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Date: 2/15/2010 2:24:00 PM

DASJ, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Date: 2/14/2010 9:26:00 AM

another good one!

Date: 2/13/2010 6:59:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Dane Ann..love it...Marty...P.S. I've posted another end-line poem...a senryu "True Love"

Date: 2/13/2010 4:26:00 PM

Beautiful and sad at the same time. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Date: 2/13/2010 2:41:00 PM

hmmmmm pause for much thought! Light & Love

Date: 2/13/2010 1:01:00 PM

War always comes at a great cost. God Bless Phyl

Date: 2/13/2010 12:50:00 PM

Though provoking poem with an interesting twist at the end. Reminds one of the cost. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen