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Aqua Space

AQUA SPACE liquid  as space something  of a paradox  an immediate  disjuncture    freeflowing with  implications void  as  a gateway   generates a sensation of  sound in space by a shared  a to  fluidity a contrast  embodied to precisely  flow in a spirit  of openness  from enforced  seclusion fundamentally discrete in   a collage of flotsam a   mirrored reflective surface in an ingenuity of conspiring  space NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 9/6/2022 5:01:00 AM
Brian a trying task to venture into this form of Poetry. You have done it so well, and I admire your attempt in this difficult form. Thanks for sharing the lesson in format. Your abilities as a Poet clearly show in this fine effort of Yours. You have been here forever and have seen many Poets come and go. I always appreciated your contest and the comments you give to all. Always encouraging. I left and came back several times 2005 is when I was here. Remembering Michael Jordan, Raul Moreno,
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:02:00 AM
So many more. You were here back then. I respect that. I miss so many wonderful poets that left. Great people to know and miss. Again thanks for sharing...

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