Brian Strand Poet Other

Aqua Space

AQUA SPACE

liquid
 as space
something
 of a paradox
 an immediate
 disjuncture
   freeflowing
with 
implications

void 
as
 a
gateway
  generates
a sensation
of
 sound
in space
by a shared 
a
to  fluidity

a contrast
 embodied
to precisely
 flow
in a spirit 
of
openness
 from
enforced
   seclusion
fundamentally
discrete
in
  a collage
of
flotsam

a
  mirrored
reflective surface
in
an
ingenuity
of
conspiring 
space

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
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Michael Tor September 6, 2022 at 5:01 AM Brian a trying task to venture into this form of Poetry. You have done it so well, and I admire your attempt in this difficult form. Thanks for sharing the lesson in format. Your abilities as a Poet clearly show in this fine effort of Yours. You have been here forever and have seen many Poets come and go. I always appreciated your contest and the comments you give to all. Always encouraging. I left and came back several times 2005 is when I was here. Remembering Michael Jordan, Raul Moreno, Michael Tor September 6, 2022 at 5:02 AM So many more. You were here back then. I respect that. I miss so many wonderful poets that left. Great people to know and miss. Again thanks for sharing...