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April Showers Bring May Flowers Anacreontic Verse

With loving drops
from heavens lap
greyness fades 
from every view
In its place
color, born to sing
shines in verse
to natures music
Accompanying
sounds of triumph
are heard above
raindrops patter
Reds, yellows, lilacs
smile timidly 
into the blueness 
of their mothers breast
With Mays arrival
a golden father
looks down with
beaming pride 
to see his
children at play,
nestled in new warmth
and to new 
resolution

Contest by Edward Ebbs 04/03/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:31 PM
very lovely. it's fun seeing these oldies but goodies in your back page, Charlie.
Smith Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Scars Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Charlie, many congrats on your placement in the contest. :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Thank you LuLoo...
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Hi Charlie, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in the Anacreontic verse contest. Sandra
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Lindley Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:54 AM
A vivid and very enjoyable poem to read this morn my friend. A7
Smith Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Thanks for the visit Robert and your encouragement...
Haight Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Lovely, Charlie, with colorful imagery. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Smith Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I so appreciate your kindness...
Ashe Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 5:21 PM
This is a new form to me Charlie but your expression to upcoming May...."With Mays arrival....." to the end says it all! Nice Write!
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Thank you Walter. Most kind of you to visit...
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 2:39 PM
- Colorful and beautiful - Good luck in the contest, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I'm so happy for your visit...
Scars Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Charlie, perfect for the contest! Well written and good luck :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:22 PM
You are very kind, thank you Luloo...
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:16 AM
really enjoyed your take on the theme Charlie good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Thank you so much Jan...
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