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Tricube challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Oliver McKeithan 7/28/25

 

April showers

Sudden rain will there be a rainbow? Patches of bright blue sky peep through clouds Raindrops cease petrichor scent rises
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/fun write. What a cute/pretty picture. Love Both... Have a blessed day with your win................
Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Jan. Like the picture that matches well with your entry.
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Thanks so much for the contest placement, it was a fun challenge!
Poet Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:59 AM
Jan, your adorable poem evokes a sense of hope and rebirth by capturing the ephemeral beauty and transience of nature, especially the interaction between rain and the appearance of a rainbow.
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Thanks so much Sotto - I will share some poetry news that will make you smile, soup mail to follow!! hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Jan, this is a very lovely, descriptive poem~~great use of your syllables! I read Arthur's response. LOL! Janice
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 11:42 AM
thanks Janice, I hope my reply makes him smile! hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Who is this April you speak of, and where does she shower?
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 11:42 AM
She is as regular as "cockwork" lol I will send you a soup mail Arthur lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:46 PM
Sweet and cute! When I looked up the word petrichor, I read a nice word: The petrichor never fails to take me back to my childhood. Best wishes, hugs
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:49 PM
thanks for dropping by Abdullah:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:45 PM
thanks for the vocabulary lesson, jan! never heard "petrichor" before - i like it!
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:48 PM
I learned it from soup lol:-) hugs jan xx
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