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         Didactic Cinquain



         Picnic
         Everyone loves
         Lunching, munching
         Making lovers world go around
         Rains came


         February 22, 2020
             7:30am PST


         Syllables 2,4, 6, 8, 2


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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Yes, this is the other style of Cinquain . It's a good one for teaching to our children so they can learn about words. Very nicely done, Panagiota.
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:05 PM
Sending you the Traditional Cinquian Form via email which it indeed this poem is. I did not use the Modern Cinquain is. That form seems much easier for kids. PR
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 7:04 PM
I know there are two kinds, Andrea. )) I chose this. Did my best..)) thanks... Panagiota xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Hell Panagiota, rain will always ruin a picnic.Picnic are fun. have a nice evening my friend. hugs xx Darlene. xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:09 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes I am. have a nice day my friend. Darlene xx
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Darlene...yes indeed! I bet you are fun at a picnic. Panagiota xx
Gilmour Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 4:34 PM
I love picnics and your sweet poem made me think that soon spring will arrive with all that goes with it - such a lovely thought. We have had so much rain here over the past month I am truly sick of it. Loved your poem Panagiota
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Send rain to California....badly needed. Picnics are sweet events, Thank you, dearest Ann Panagiota xx
Warrior Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:57 AM
Darn rain...I like the rain though...lovely cinquain, Panni...all the best from the Wingster...and thanks for all your support my friend...^WW^ :o)
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 2:37 PM
^WW^ I walked once barefoot, in a Chicago summer rain...no umbrella one summer! It was the best! Thank you for comment, Wingster and your support. Panni xxxx and cat Irene ^~^! See Ann Gilmour's First rate and First Place Poem on Irene. What a delight and cool poem....-))
Michael Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Now the rain falling...That's why I prefer the indoors...besides there're too many bugs just roaming about in the grass... Nice one...
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Bugs....ugh..love our food. Panagiota xx 5 star hotel preferred
Godwin Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Bummer! You painted the picture and landed the bummer - and I felt it all - good job! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM
Greetings, Cay Cay! Thank you very much. Nice to see you again! Panagiota xx
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Rain ruined the day. Tom
Romios Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Yes, in a way...but a rainbow followed.))) That was unexpected. Cinquains are not that easy to write...for me, anyway. Thanks Tom..Panagiota xx
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