April

Aspirations flood
Periods bloom like flowers
Raining poetry…
In a photographer’s lens
Lure of spring…gone in a flash



April 2, 2023
Contest: March into April Tankacrostic 
Host: Andrea Dietrich

Checked by: howmanysyllables dot com

aprilacrostic

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Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2023 at 11:57 AM

- The flowering in spring is like the best C-vitamin after a long winter - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Rhoda :) -

Rhoda Tripp

June 25, 2023 at 3:12 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise

Christuraj Alex

April 9, 2023 at 5:49 AM

A great and beautiful short and sweet word painting. Congratulations!

Rhoda Tripp

June 25, 2023 at 3:12 PM

Thank you kindly Christuraj

Andrea Dietrich

April 8, 2023 at 11:07 AM

i loved all of this except the line about periods. Almost gave it first place. The last part is so awesome, rhoda. Congrats

Rhoda Tripp

June 25, 2023 at 3:14 PM

Thank you so very much, Dear Andrea. You’re right about the word “periods.” It doesn’t fit. Thank you for hosting a fun contest

Joseph May

April 2, 2023 at 4:49 PM

Love the last line of this lovely write Rhoda, best wishes

Rhoda Tripp

June 25, 2023 at 3:14 PM

Thank you very much Joseph. I hope you are well

Paul Callus

April 2, 2023 at 2:18 PM

This Acrostic-Tanka provides the author with a double challenge, and I can say you have ably tackled it, Rhoda. Life is short...time flies by, and it's so easy to miss beautiful moments with which we are continuously being gifted. ~ Best regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

June 25, 2023 at 3:15 PM

Thank you dear Paul for your kind and thoughtful comment. You are appreciated