April

Aspirations flood Periods bloom like flowers Raining poetry… In a photographer’s lens Lure of spring…gone in a flash April 2, 2023 Contest: March into April Tankacrostic Host: Andrea Dietrich Checked by: howmanysyllables dot com

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 11:57:00 AM

- The flowering in spring is like the best C-vitamin after a long winter - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Rhoda :) -

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 6/25/2023 3:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2023 5:49:00 AM

A great and beautiful short and sweet word painting. Congratulations!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 6/25/2023 3:12:00 PM

Thank you kindly Christuraj

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2023 11:07:00 AM

i loved all of this except the line about periods. Almost gave it first place. The last part is so awesome, rhoda. Congrats

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 6/25/2023 3:14:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Dear Andrea. You’re right about the word “periods.” It doesn’t fit. Thank you for hosting a fun contest

Joseph May

Date: 4/2/2023 4:49:00 PM

Love the last line of this lovely write Rhoda, best wishes

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 6/25/2023 3:14:00 PM

Thank you very much Joseph. I hope you are well

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2023 2:18:00 PM

This Acrostic-Tanka provides the author with a double challenge, and I can say you have ably tackled it, Rhoda. Life is short...time flies by, and it's so easy to miss beautiful moments with which we are continuously being gifted. ~ Best regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 6/25/2023 3:15:00 PM

Thank you dear Paul for your kind and thoughtful comment. You are appreciated

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2023 1:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest. Thank you for your visit.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 6/25/2023 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Eve. You are a kind heart