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Apricot Jam

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Sun rose like Apricot jam..

                                     saddled in Cobalt Blue horizon clouds..

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/23/2011 3:31:00 AM

Beautifully expressed in a few poetic words! Nice one! Regards, Robert.

Cherie Durbin

Date: 5/15/2011 6:32:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Sara!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/14/2011 4:55:00 PM

I am smiling so much at the thought of this, Sara! What a very unique and yummy way of looking at the sun! Really love this one :0 I hope that all i swell with you and your family :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/14/2011 1:43:00 PM

You know Sara you have made me look at apricot jam (in a brand new light) ha ha,and a really fine piece by the way!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2011 12:14:00 AM

wowie, Sara. was this for any contest. It's so beautiful. And yes, the pathway poem is pretty much how I am. I enjoy complaining to let off tension, but all in all, I take everything in my life with ease, and just move on with my life, not letting it really affect my overall usual cheerful attitude. Also I am not prone to emotionalism and I think this helps me be the way I am. LUv, Andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/13/2011 8:30:00 PM

Interesting outlook on the sunrise, Sara! I almost wished that the sky could also be referred to some kind of food, I was imagining from your description perhaps blue berry yogurt :) or something. Other wise each is quite a good description. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my poem. Be well, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2011 8:17:00 PM

wonderful visual effect and such stirring imagery Sara.. lovely expression in the mind's eye..luv.. enjoy happy weekend my friend..

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2011 6:04:00 PM

Oh love this, Sara! If this is for a contest? It will be a winner!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/13/2011 6:03:00 PM

And apricot jam is such an enticing sight! Effective "food imagery" for this monuku. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 3:33:00 PM

wow A VERY LOVELY image dear Sara, i'd be very tempted to eat the beauty of this sun rose, if i was a grizzly bear... and imagine all the colors of sky.. if i had one to many every horizon... lovely and enjoyed,,, take care and enjoy,,.p.d.