Apricot Jam

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Sun rose like Apricot jam..

                                     saddled in Cobalt Blue horizon clouds..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 3:31 AM
Beautifully expressed in a few poetic words! Nice one! Regards, Robert.
Durbin Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 6:32 AM
Beautiful imagery, Sara!
K. Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 4:55 PM
I am smiling so much at the thought of this, Sara! What a very unique and yummy way of looking at the sun! Really love this one :0 I hope that all i swell with you and your family :)
Maverick Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:43 PM
You know Sara you have made me look at apricot jam (in a brand new light) ha ha,and a really fine piece by the way!
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 12:14 AM
wowie, Sara. was this for any contest. It's so beautiful. And yes, the pathway poem is pretty much how I am. I enjoy complaining to let off tension, but all in all, I take everything in my life with ease, and just move on with my life, not letting it really affect my overall usual cheerful attitude. Also I am not prone to emotionalism and I think this helps me be the way I am. LUv, Andrea
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May 13, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Interesting outlook on the sunrise, Sara! I almost wished that the sky could also be referred to some kind of food, I was imagining from your description perhaps blue berry yogurt :) or something. Other wise each is quite a good description. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my poem. Be well, Caroline.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 8:17 PM
wonderful visual effect and such stirring imagery Sara.. lovely expression in the mind's eye..luv.. enjoy happy weekend my friend..
Richards Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Oh love this, Sara! If this is for a contest? It will be a winner!
Song Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 6:03 PM
And apricot jam is such an enticing sight! Effective "food imagery" for this monuku. Gwendolen
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May 13, 2011 at 3:33 PM
wow A VERY LOVELY image dear Sara, i'd be very tempted to eat the beauty of this sun rose, if i was a grizzly bear... and imagine all the colors of sky.. if i had one to many every horizon... lovely and enjoyed,,, take care and enjoy,,.p.d.
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May 13, 2011 at 3:15 PM
A splendid painting of sunrise, Sara. Great Monoku! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 2:39 PM
What a fantastic images you penned to convey your thoughts, Sara
Horne Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 12:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Sara : ) Makes me feel kind of hungry!!!
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