Apricot

apricot sunrise
seen through pear tree's white blossoms....
birds quietly sleep

naturehaiku

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2018 12:58:00 PM

oh, this is lovely

Paul Callus

Date: 3/9/2018 3:30:00 PM

A lovely and tender morning visual, Sara. Robins come to my garden in autumn and leave in spring...they are lovely company! Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2018 4:25:00 PM

Paul, I have never seen a Robin nesting around my home but I have a friend who sent me a video of one nesting in a hanging basket on her porch and she lives about a mile from me. I do see them in flocks in the spring and in the fall in my front yard. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/5/2018 6:16:00 PM

A splendid and serene haiku Sara with great use of color in your beautiful imagery.. a wonderful pic of a lovely nesting robin too.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2018 6:56:00 AM

Susan, Thanks for dropping by. I have never seen a robin nesting around here but a friend of mine sent me a picture of one nesting in a hanging basket on her porch. Maybe around here they get up high in a tree or in the wooded areas. Your comments are uplifting and encouraging. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2018 8:29:00 PM

Nicely done, Sara, imagery is great.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2018 5:37:00 AM

Eve, Your presence is always uplifting and your comments encouraging. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Lunita Blanca

Date: 2/28/2018 6:45:00 PM

Reminds me of spring and the wonders of nature.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2018 5:37:00 AM

Carlos, Yes, spring is here in the south even though it still feels cold at night and early morn. Thank you for your presence and taking time to comment. Sara

John Lawless

Date: 2/28/2018 4:13:00 PM

nicely portrayed stillness...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2018 5:36:00 AM

John, Thanks for dropping by. It was so quiet and still out on the porch just before nature awakened to another day. I am not getting out there very much anymore but I am going to try to start having my quiet time again. Sara