Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Appreciate Me

Show me to heavens 
door so sweet 
Give to me the love 
I have craved 
Make my heart skip 
every other beat
Please help my lost 
soul to be saved

Taking away all of 
my past pains
That have in truth 
held me back
Calm my mind so 
I’m again sane
Give me a strength 
for all I lack

Answer all my 
unanswered questions
Help to build me up, 
not let me down
Explore each of my 
many dimensions 
While letting me stay 
safe and sound

And if my insecurities 
begin to shine through 
Need me and show 
me I’m much more
Just know in my life, 
all I ever need is you
Appreciate me so 
much more than before

8/8/20

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Tony Hargreaves September 23, 2020 at 1:33 PM Hi Brenda, Your poem I can relate to. It brings back feelings that I had to deal with in my younger days. Take care. Tony

John Fleming August 26, 2020 at 9:04 AM I appreciate you, Poetess. :) Lovely poetry by the way...and a really well deserved win. Excellent writing! With fondest thoughts always. :) john

Aditi Mishra August 12, 2020 at 2:41 AM Brenda I loved your tender touch of emotions in this beautiful muse. Congratulations on your win :)

Paula Goldsmith August 10, 2020 at 8:25 AM Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day.............

Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2020 at 5:41 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Brenda :) - // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri August 10, 2020 at 7:41 AM Anne-Lise thank you so much!:)

John Watt August 9, 2020 at 5:05 PM Feeling appreciated is important in any relationship. Your words of love are deeply felt, Brenda. Congratulations on another wonderful win ~ John Brenda Chiri August 10, 2020 at 7:41 AM John thx so much!;)

Sigrid Ermine August 9, 2020 at 2:17 PM Bright and flowing verse. A very deserved win. Speaking to our heart and God as your poem indicates is so important. You captured a lot here. Brenda Chiri August 10, 2020 at 7:41 AM Thank you!;)

Regina Mcintosh August 9, 2020 at 4:42 AM A beautiful verse. I enjoyed this so much and wish you many "secure" moments in this lifetime. Love and prayers Brenda Chiri August 9, 2020 at 1:08 PM Gina thank you so much! Your comment is so appreciated!:)