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Appreciate Me

Show me to heavens door so sweet Give to me the love I have craved Make my heart skip every other beat Please help my lost soul to be saved Taking away all of my past pains That have in truth held me back Calm my mind so I’m again sane Give me a strength for all I lack Answer all my unanswered questions Help to build me up, not let me down Explore each of my many dimensions While letting me stay safe and sound And if my insecurities begin to shine through Need me and show me I’m much more Just know in my life, all I ever need is you Appreciate me so much more than before
8/8/20

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Date: 9/23/2020 1:33:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Your poem I can relate to. It brings back feelings that I had to deal with in my younger days. Take care. Tony
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:04:00 AM
I appreciate you, Poetess. :) Lovely poetry by the way...and a really well deserved win. Excellent writing! With fondest thoughts always. :) john
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Date: 8/12/2020 2:41:00 AM
Brenda I loved your tender touch of emotions in this beautiful muse. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/10/2020 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 8/10/2020 5:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Brenda :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/10/2020 7:41:00 AM
Anne-Lise thank you so much!:)
Date: 8/9/2020 5:05:00 PM
Feeling appreciated is important in any relationship. Your words of love are deeply felt, Brenda. Congratulations on another wonderful win ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/10/2020 7:41:00 AM
John thx so much!;)
Date: 8/9/2020 2:17:00 PM
Bright and flowing verse. A very deserved win. Speaking to our heart and God as your poem indicates is so important. You captured a lot here.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/10/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you!;)
Date: 8/9/2020 4:42:00 AM
A beautiful verse. I enjoyed this so much and wish you many "secure" moments in this lifetime. Love and prayers
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/9/2020 1:08:00 PM
Gina thank you so much! Your comment is so appreciated!:)

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