Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Apply the Brake

Apply the brake on thoughts vicious
Fall not to thrust of lust
Heart shrivels by acts pernicious 
Ego misdeeds unjust

Tender love God caress
Open hearts He does bless 
Let’s not His laws transgress

Our joy at stake
Apply the brake

17-December-2021
Quietus 

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David Kavanagh December 17, 2021 at 1:11 PM Temptation Seeker, man’s greatest weakness, does it ever go away, I really cannot say, but I can say, this is another fine quietus, cheers David Unseeking Seeker December 17, 2021 at 6:22 PM The universe tests in jest. Are we at our best or react at ego’s behest?

Gershon Wolf December 17, 2021 at 10:28 AM Interesting way to express self-restraint, Seeker. Gotta go get my brakes checked for wear and tear! Peace, Gershon Unseeking Seeker December 17, 2021 at 6:21 PM Indeed, the brake is a more useful tool than the accelerator