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Apples and Oranges

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*Image of Apple Fruit Oranges provided by Pixabay. Apples and Oranges Poetic Form: Monoku I have gazed o'er the orchards ~~ until the time your apple caught my eye 2021 April 30 *1st Place* All Yours (May 12) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 May 12 *1st Place* "The Way You Look At Me" ~~JCB Brul: Judged 2021 May 03

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Paris-Maree Boreham
Date: 8/21/2021 8:09:00 AM
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hey hey i want one of those apples- where's the orchids? hahaa this one makes me hungry, awesome monoku William!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/21/2021 8:24:00 AM
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Paris-Maree, I am truly glad that you liked my monoku, thanks my friend, Aloha!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/13/2021 10:26:00 AM
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Just plain fun William! Double congratulations to you! Great distilling of the theme! Aloha my friend.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/13/2021 11:12:00 AM
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That it was when the spark enflamed, Sam, your words honor me truly my friend, you are appreciated, Aloha!
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 5/13/2021 4:25:00 AM
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I just love this!!! Brilliant!!! God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/13/2021 7:00:00 AM
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Thank you so very much, Gina. Ke Akua pu (God be with you) Aloha!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2021 7:41:00 AM
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Lovely, William ~
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2021 9:27:00 AM
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I appreciate you, Line, thanks, Aloha!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 3:32:00 AM
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A good one.... Congratulations on your placement William
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2021 3:37:00 AM
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A nice sharing, Paghunda, thank you, Aloha!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 5/4/2021 2:57:00 AM
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Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently concluded contest. God bless you.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2021 3:15:00 AM
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Angels of mercy embrace your kind words, Beata, you are loved, Aloha!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 5/4/2021 2:56:00 AM
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WoW! William, I really liked your take on the contest theme. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2021 3:12:00 AM
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Truly grateful for your kind expressions, Alexis, thank you, Aloha!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/3/2021 11:39:00 PM
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It reminded me of Adam and the apple :) Congrats on your win William.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/3/2021 11:42:00 PM
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I am grateful, Carol, may joy be with you always, Aloha
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/3/2021 11:20:00 PM
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Congratulations!
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John Fleming
Date: 4/30/2021 12:23:00 PM
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I like this. Nicely conceived, William -- and good luck in the contest! Best regards. :) john
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Hilo Poet
Date: 4/30/2021 2:01:00 PM
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Appreciate it, John, also for the encouragement, Aloha!

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