William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monoku

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Apples and Oranges

*Image of Apple Fruit Oranges provided by Pixabay.

Apples and Oranges
Poetic Form: Monoku

I have gazed o'er the orchards ~~ until the time your apple caught my eye

2021 April 30
*1st Place*
All Yours (May 12)
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 May 12
*1st Place*
"The Way You Look At Me"
~~JCB Brul: Judged 2021 May 03

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Paris-Maree Boreham August 21, 2021 at 8:09 AM hey hey i want one of those apples- where's the orchids? hahaa this one makes me hungry, awesome monoku William! William Kelii Kekaula August 21, 2021 at 8:24 AM Paris-Maree, I am truly glad that you liked my monoku, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman May 13, 2021 at 10:26 AM Just plain fun William! Double congratulations to you! Great distilling of the theme! Aloha my friend. William Kelii Kekaula May 13, 2021 at 11:12 AM That it was when the spark enflamed, Sam, your words honor me truly my friend, you are appreciated, Aloha!

Regina Mcintosh May 13, 2021 at 4:25 AM I just love this!!! Brilliant!!! God bless you friend. Love, Gina William Kelii Kekaula May 13, 2021 at 7:00 AM Thank you so very much, Gina. Ke Akua pu (God be with you) Aloha!

Line Gauthier May 4, 2021 at 7:41 AM Lovely, William ~ William Kelii Kekaula May 4, 2021 at 9:27 AM I appreciate you, Line, thanks, Aloha!

Paghunda Zahid May 4, 2021 at 3:32 AM A good one.... Congratulations on your placement William William Kelii Kekaula May 4, 2021 at 3:37 AM A nice sharing, Paghunda, thank you, Aloha!

Beata Agustin May 4, 2021 at 2:57 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently concluded contest. God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula May 4, 2021 at 3:15 AM Angels of mercy embrace your kind words, Beata, you are loved, Aloha!

Alexis Y. May 4, 2021 at 2:56 AM WoW! William, I really liked your take on the contest theme. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-)Alexis William Kelii Kekaula May 4, 2021 at 3:12 AM Truly grateful for your kind expressions, Alexis, thank you, Aloha!

Carol Mitra May 3, 2021 at 11:39 PM It reminded me of Adam and the apple :) Congrats on your win William. William Kelii Kekaula May 3, 2021 at 11:42 PM I am grateful, Carol, may joy be with you always, Aloha

Christuraj Alex May 3, 2021 at 11:20 PM Congratulations!

John Fleming April 30, 2021 at 12:23 PM I like this. Nicely conceived, William -- and good luck in the contest! Best regards. :) john William Kelii Kekaula April 30, 2021 at 2:01 PM Appreciate it, John, also for the encouragement, Aloha!