Apple Pickin' Time

Cartons, squashed boxes moving in mountains
Men on motorbikes, sway-backed mules
Men bended carrying crates of apples
Hessian bags, sewn shut wait at home domains

In the Himalayas region there is no tradition or event 
To announce apple picking, not plucking season
From August to October but depends on summer extent
But the locals agree it generally begins with reason

I landed at a guest house in Manali, Himalaya
Small houses lay hidden among the apple trees
As every family in the area owns an apple tree 
Apples have become integral part of their lives 

Oh, Cartons, squashed boxes moved in mountains
Men on motorbikes, sway-backed mules
Men bended carrying crates of apples
Hessian bags, sewn shut wait at home domains.

Unfamiliar, curious, as my excitement grew
Wandered off in a trice, my hotel owner suspicious
She followed me some distance so as to view
And make sure I wasn’t plucking apples delicious.

                        ++++++++
Dr. Ram Mehta
Date: 18-10-13
5th place win
Contest :Apple picking time
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Deschler Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 2:48 PM
This was a different take on the "apple pickin' time" theme! Very well done! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for all of the kind congrats on my poems! I appreciate it very much!
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:25 AM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
Fisher Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Way to go on the contest and enjoyed the description of another land.
A  Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Dr. , Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~
Anglesey Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Nice vision of the Himalaya's. I enjoy your cultural writes. Congratulations on your win :)
Ligon Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Nice visuals.
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 7:25 AM
This is a sweet poem and describing another country's culture..Lovely poem..It puts a smile on my face especially the ending.
Jackson Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Lovely poem and so atmospheric. Best wishes Linda x
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 9:39 AM
charming write, dr. ram.. we don't exactly have apple pickin' time in asia.. mangoes, yes!... :) huggs
Babcock Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 6:28 PM
I can taste and smell those apples hanging on the trees. Nice rhyming lines on this wonderful poem. love phyl
Horsman Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:47 AM
This is brilliant Dr, i have known many of these, apple picking times,, but this is so different and enjoyable...
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:38 AM
great poem you did for the contest. And yes,this one is unique as Kelly says here!!
Deschler Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:45 PM
A very unique take on the apple theme! However, I enjoyed it very much. This took me away to another land. I admire poems that can do that! Wonderful work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
Devnath  Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Ahh! really delicious poem enjoyed. A nice picture of apple pickin' time. Beautifully done. Loved always, bl
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:34 AM
Ahh!! The freshness of apples picked straight from the tree..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It should do well..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:02 AM
tremendous poem Dr Ram gl in contest with this excellent write Shadow x smile
Ay Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:44 AM
unique concept, I feel like there's potential for metaphor? Great work!
Bantawa Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:32 AM
nice poem Dr. Ram
Wilson Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:10 AM
very good and quite interesting too..well done..love,Deb
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