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(Entry for A Fruity Haiku Poetry Contest, sponsored by Tania Kitchin, submitted May 25, 2025)

as red as love's blush smooth and solid to the touch ~ flavor sweet and lush

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/14/2025 11:15:00 AM

Jim, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku.

Jim Healey
Date: 6/14/2025 2:00:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. Always a pleasure. Cheers from Canada.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2025 12:39:00 AM

I think this is one of my favorites. Not the fruit. The way you did your haiku! Congrats

Jim Healey
Date: 6/14/2025 4:07:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Always appreciate hearing from you. Take care.