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I slipped off my smile and removed those tight shoes..... alone in my room
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Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 10:52 PM
Lovely Carrie. Many congrats for this win.
A   Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 1:22 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD
Poet Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Love this Carrie!Congrats on your win!!
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 9:20 PM
aw... I feel the relief... Great poem, well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
Grisetti Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Congratulations on a spectacular win.
Arowolo Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Nice piece,Carrie...Congratulations on your win..
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:24 PM
ONe of my favorites here! Congrats on the win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations Carrie, nice one xx
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Great one for the contest..I hope that you didn't have on those tight shoes though..Sometimes in life we do those things_like wear what is uncomfortable and smile while doing it ..Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 9:22 PM
wow, this is AWESOME. So true of people too!!
Poet Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Good senryu here Carrie!Best wishes for the contest.
A   Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Hi Carrie,, great senryu,,, thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD
Bauer Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 3:24 PM
so much revealed in so few words! bravo!
Sivey Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 9:24 AM
What a brilliantly written poem my friend! This is a fabulous write Carrie, I love how you wrote this delightful poem! Sometimes its very easy to slip out of your smile when you are alone, it just happens at times! Very awesome piece, Great Work!!
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