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a patch of daisies
          spread in the grass on the hill
                a white cloud appeared

Heidi Sands

7/1/21

beautyflowerhaiku

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Millard Lowe

July 22, 2021 at 10:07 AM

Seen and felt. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

Heidi Sands

July 22, 2021 at 11:34 AM

Nice to hear. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)

Rama Balasubramanian

July 2, 2021 at 11:24 AM

Must have brought you much joy. A patch of flowers are a joy to behold.

Heidi Sands

July 7, 2021 at 2:07 PM

Yes, the beautiful bright white patch of daisies, look like a cloud on the ground and happy. Thank you Rama :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 1, 2021 at 3:54 PM

Hello Heidi, looks like the daises will have warter fro mother nature. Hugs darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 2, 2021 at 10:20 AM

Hello Heidi, A cloud on the ground! Wow! Yes the rain will help. Your welcome . Hugs Darlene

Heidi Sands

July 1, 2021 at 4:03 PM

Well, I didn't word the Haiku quite right. The daisies actually looked like a cloud on the ground. But, we are getting some rain the next few days, so they will be getting some water. Thank you Darlene :)

Tom Cunningham

July 1, 2021 at 3:21 PM

A beautiful summer image Heidi. Tom

Heidi Sands

July 1, 2021 at 3:44 PM

Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comments! They were really pretty to see :)

Vijay Pandit

July 1, 2021 at 1:45 PM

Your poem is as beautiful as the flowers it describes. Well done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

July 1, 2021 at 1:50 PM

Thank you Vijay. The white daisies looked like a cloud. I wasn't sure to use the word landed instead of appeared. :)

Sotto Poet

July 1, 2021 at 1:36 PM

I loved this Haiku; the blooming daisies between April and June, with clouds that bring smooth rain, are a perfect combination to enjoy nature to the fullest. Kindest regards, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

July 1, 2021 at 1:49 PM

Thank you Lasaad. I saw a patch of beautiful white daisies today. From a distance, they looked like a bright white cloud on the ground :