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a patch of daisies spread in the grass on the hill a white cloud appeared Heidi Sands 7/1/21

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Millard Lowe

Date: 7/22/2021 10:07:00 AM

Seen and felt. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/22/2021 11:34:00 AM

Nice to hear. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/2/2021 11:24:00 AM

Must have brought you much joy. A patch of flowers are a joy to behold.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2021 2:07:00 PM

Yes, the beautiful bright white patch of daisies, look like a cloud on the ground and happy. Thank you Rama :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/1/2021 3:54:00 PM

Hello Heidi, looks like the daises will have warter fro mother nature. Hugs darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2021 10:20:00 AM

Hello Heidi, A cloud on the ground! Wow! Yes the rain will help. Your welcome . Hugs Darlene

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2021 4:03:00 PM

Well, I didn't word the Haiku quite right. The daisies actually looked like a cloud on the ground. But, we are getting some rain the next few days, so they will be getting some water. Thank you Darlene :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/1/2021 3:21:00 PM

A beautiful summer image Heidi. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2021 3:44:00 PM

Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comments! They were really pretty to see :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/1/2021 1:45:00 PM

Your poem is as beautiful as the flowers it describes. Well done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2021 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. The white daisies looked like a cloud. I wasn't sure to use the word landed instead of appeared. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/1/2021 1:36:00 PM

I loved this Haiku; the blooming daisies between April and June, with clouds that bring smooth rain, are a perfect combination to enjoy nature to the fullest. Kindest regards, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2021 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad. I saw a patch of beautiful white daisies today. From a distance, they looked like a bright white cloud on the ground :

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2021 1:30:00 PM

- We write about the same beautiful flower, Heidi - A lovely haiku :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2021 1:49:00 PM

Nice Anne-Lise. I saw a bunch of beautiful white daisies today ! Thank you for your kind comment :) Hugs