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Appalachian Trail

Deserted cabins
Trees gnarled by wailing winds
The sound of a bear

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Heather Ober

April 2, 2013 at 11:10 AM

Fantastic haiku! I especially love the second line.

Andrea Dietrich

March 31, 2013 at 4:39 PM

this is how to haiku!! you have sound and sight very nicely shown!!

Ilene Bauer

March 31, 2013 at 3:14 PM

you've gotten so much into this little gem!

Suzanne Delaney

March 31, 2013 at 10:47 AM

That really nails the scene,,,,good one.

Charmaine Chircop

March 31, 2013 at 12:57 AM

Though id never seen a bear in reality..You definitely give me the feel of myself being in that log cabin : ) Maybe i could offer him honey and become friends..Maybe i should pretend that and let it smell me all over..shoot a gun on the air to scare it away or make sure door doesn t open with the wind.Tnks for sharing this haiku..it makes one use all senses.