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Appalachian Trail

Deserted cabins
Trees gnarled by wailing winds
The sound of a bear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/2/2013 11:10:00 AM
Fantastic haiku! I especially love the second line.
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:39:00 PM
this is how to haiku!! you have sound and sight very nicely shown!!
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:14:00 PM
you've gotten so much into this little gem!
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:47:00 AM
That really nails the scene,,,,good one.
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:26:00 AM
Nice haiku, good visuals. Happy Easter. Rick
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Date: 3/31/2013 12:57:00 AM
Though id never seen a bear in reality..You definitely give me the feel of myself being in that log cabin : ) Maybe i could offer him honey and become friends..Maybe i should pretend that and let it smell me all over..shoot a gun on the air to scare it away or make sure door doesn t open with the wind.Tnks for sharing this haiku..it makes one use all senses.
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Date: 3/30/2013 8:11:00 PM
Yipes!! Better bar the door!! Good one, Isaiah!!
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