Apology

I’m sorry I left so abruptly. I knew it would end premature. Wasn't strong enough you see. Didn't really tell anybody. Hidden from most Exposed to few Not even fully. Masked by comedy. The little things poked Poked so much between my temples Too many thoughts I suppose Led to this manifestation Self-pity Self-disgust Much love.

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:02:00 PM

Hi Ana , a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:12:00 PM

Ana. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2013 2:12:00 PM

CONGRATS!!! love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 9:43:00 AM

Ana, Congratulations on your sweet awesome free verse win.... you poem rocks... :-) Linda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/1/2013 4:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Ana xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/31/2013 1:14:00 PM

Ana, a nice poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)