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Apocalyptic Visions

Earths red crust shudders Skyline crackles purple forks Famine feet flurry My willow tree scorched Lunar eclipse eternal Barefoot beach walk dream Volcanic ash views A black season treelines crunch Whimpered solo bark Stagnant water tea Pungent roots and herbs galore Humanless abyss

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Date: 9/7/2013 4:08:00 PM
Hi Shane, i think I like the last one... one with no abyss... a different kind of apocalyptic... love it..Linda
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/18/2013 7:43:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I don't really do 'apocalyptic', but this was for a competition.
Date: 8/26/2013 3:41:00 PM
yes, this is vivid indeed! very descriptive one. Makes you feel the tragedy of it all.
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/6/2013 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Quite dark, but it was for a contest.
Date: 8/26/2013 7:01:00 AM
Such a vivid depiction of an Apocalyptic scenarios in excellent Haiku.
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Shane Cogan
Date: 8/26/2013 12:36:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. I had the competition in mind when writing this so tried to so as you said.
Date: 8/25/2013 7:57:00 PM
Four excellent examples of Haiku! I'm impressed my friend! Kudos!
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Shane Cogan
Date: 8/26/2013 12:36:00 PM
Thanks, Jack for your positive feedback.