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Apocalypse

Careless whispers from sordid lips Echo through the wooded landscape of hearts. Destructive wants and needless needs, Carried on the remnants of rust and bone, Discarded amongst the fallen bridges, Where once that precious garden grew— Abundant petals with morning dew… Oh how those poetic colours swirled In the abstract minds of troubled youth, With Silver tongue of rivers deep And how that made the willows weep. They wept in mournful sorrow first Then blew light-heartedly in swift gay breeze, Swaying merrily to gardener’s tune, Reciting songs of lovers’ moon. Drooping soon, one by one, Neglect: naïve or playboy rule? No willow’s death carved into stone Sighs forgotten—another clone. But each one knew they weren’t alone With all decaying days that passed. And thoughts of how the last was strewn: Loved too quick, deceased by noon! Empty melodies confined to ash No garden path to lead them up, The fickle gardener’s longing tales: Seeking roses, endless fails. Bitter stumps, now burnt and bare, Fruitless end to nature’s womb, Apocalyptic trails of dirt Sporadic care and endless hurt. Acidic rain to wash away Polluted minds and drunken hearts, A world once loved now fades to grey Pastel night now charcoal day. Neverland: a silly notion Truth keeps blooms of love in motion, A life of fantasy fulfilled Though one of lies is one half lived. Midnight Aurora

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/28/2019 4:52:00 PM
This was incredible, love the abstract feel to this though so very clear in expression. So many fantastic lines in this. I love how you built this poem
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Date: 10/28/2019 11:55:00 AM
WoW! A magnificent rainbow of ink beauty this poignant poem be, Midnight Aurora! In the Land of the Midnight Sun, your dazzling muse shines ever brightly. A GrEaT work of poetic art! So glad I stopped by to take a peek thru this keen keyhole. I saw a fearless quill rider, who strides the wind stroke bold. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 10/28/2019 9:37:00 AM
You only write the very best poetry.. this was an amazing read, MA.
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Date: 10/27/2019 10:27:00 AM
A smooth flow in this poem with intriguing lines and wonderful natural use of rhyme. A Great write!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/27/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thanks James. I appreciate that.
Date: 10/22/2019 12:50:00 PM
Amazing imagery! This is a beauty :-) x
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/24/2019 4:35:00 PM
Thank you for checking out my poems. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 10/21/2019 6:30:00 AM
Acidic rain to wash away Polluted minds and drunken hearts, Love this poem, this part esp. Add me on Instagram if you wish. @Myrel111 I post poetry there sometimes also
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Date: 10/24/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thank you but not on Instagram.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:29:00 PM
I love the imagery in your writing. Off to check out the next one.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/20/2019 6:01:00 PM
Lol.. Thank you.
Date: 10/19/2019 5:43:00 PM
This line: With Silver tongue of rivers deep/And how that made the willows weep...beautiful!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 10/20/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Kim
Date: 9/15/2019 10:31:00 PM
I became swept away by your romantic imagery in your most excellent poem, Midnight! Beautiful and exquisite! Enjoyed this very much! :)
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 9/22/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Laura. I've just seen your comment. So glad you enjoyed! :)

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