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Anxious Moments

anxious moments...
a silent phone
beside ticking clock

smiling face
with quick response...
a known ringtone




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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2011 5:40:00 PM

two we jewels under appreciated do to there size! Congrad's Light & Love

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/9/2011 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM Kash

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2011 11:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win Kash. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/28/2011 3:37:00 PM

I love how these work together! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/27/2011 10:41:00 PM

I was following Dane Ann's lines below...but no one followed mine...Ahhhhhhh. Rats!.. Anyways, Kash, great job with this all too familiar feeling expressed in your double haiku. Congrats...I feel an applause coming on.......happy days. Gwendolen

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2011 12:11:00 PM

Kash congrats on your win, very cleverly linked, loved it first time round..David

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/26/2011 11:44:00 AM

Ah, you sure expressed that anxiety well here-- and resolved it with your 2nd haiku ;) really enjoyed your haiku, Kash :D Super congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 11:44:00 PM

WAY to GO, Kash. I'm always happy to see your haiku in a winners' circle. You put a lot of effort into them and I admire that.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/25/2011 4:49:00 PM

A great connection and outcome of these two outstanding haiku. Congratulatoins on your win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/15/2011 9:07:00 PM

waiting.....and waiting....and waiting...oh,...it's ringing....(heart racing)....oh darn, it's just the door bell!! I got the waiting on a phone call thing down to a science when I used to be single....glad those days are over....and what ringtone would u be describing?....lol. Are the metaphors a bad thing in my poem or a good thing? I love the snow soooo much and couldn't think of a better way to convey the feeling...excellent notion that u brought up...expand on this 4 me... :) Gwendolen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/15/2011 6:21:00 AM

Anaticipation...hoping...waiting...at last, the ringtone! Big smiles. Nice. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/14/2011 8:25:00 PM

Kashi, you are really great with this form of verse, I've decided I'm not and will let experts like you carry the torch. A fantastic write!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/14/2011 1:04:00 PM

Ah, waiting for the phone to ring can create a lot of anxiety, Kash. So glad the "known ringtone" came to brighten the day. Very nice set of haiku, my friend. And thanks for telling me about the eight-syllable count on the quatern. I removed my entry and will rework it. I think you have another winner for Charles' latest contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/14/2011 12:57:00 PM

flowing like a jaoanese river, kashi.. enjoyed this one! : huggs!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/13/2011 11:54:00 PM

Thanks for catching my error. I fixed it to the way it was meant. My eyes must have been "worn out" on the caboose

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2011 4:08:00 PM

hahaha, I can see dinda down here guessing that you are girl! well, your haiku form is really excellent and you are learning a lot, Kash. I especially liked the first haiku and the drama of those anxious moments.

David Williams

Date: 11/13/2011 1:52:00 PM

hey Kash reads well to me, a winner..David

Jack Horne

Date: 11/13/2011 1:07:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Kash. Was so pleased to see your late fly haiku got first place : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2011 12:58:00 PM

I think.. The smily face says it all.... Enjoyed..p.d

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/13/2011 9:57:00 AM

* “Ring Ring * Ring Ring * Hello * Luv * Have You Got The Tickets for The Flight? *.* Leaving At Nine With Some Red Sweeet Wine * MmM * Luv Always * Sarah.” *

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/13/2011 9:55:00 AM

Oh yess, this how I'd feel expecting call from someone special... I think you're a girl, aren't you? You know girl so well... Thanx for your nice comment, visiting your page is a pleasure for me :) Dinda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2011 7:36:00 AM

Good one..Enjoyed reading this morn..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like winning material..When it is two Haiku, it is called a Choka.Thanks for stopping by.Sara

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