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The forest  awaits my return
As thieves of toil  steal precious hours--
With birds fluting inside, I churn.

In these autumn years , a heart leaps
For pure ventures with nature’s fill
Cherishing soil till death’s  light peeps.


Tell Me , nette onclaud contest
Jul 4, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 12, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Ashley, Congrats on your awesome win.....SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Congrats Ashley, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 5:57 PM
I like your creative descriptions, Ashley! Congrats on your win!
Callus Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 4:21 PM
I enjoyed this unique take on this 'response' theme, Ashley! Cherish every moment that life affords you! Congratulations! // paul
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July 9, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Ahhhh, to me the autumn years are the best time indeed to enjoy grandkids, freedom from a full time job. Your lovely poem brings these joys to life beautifully. Congratulations on your win. ; )
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July 9, 2016 at 12:11 PM
such zest and vigor in your wonderful lines, ashley!... sweet congrats on your placement and thanks for joining my contest.. huggs
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