Noel Flater Poet Rhyme

Ants, Ants, Ants,,,

Ants, Ants, Ants…

Ants, Ants, Everywhere
The rains come down
They come up stairs

Ants, Ants, Ants, Everywhere
The kitchens full of them
The cupboards now bare

Ants, Ants, Ants, Ants, Everywhere
The traps are out
Round them they dance, they don’t care

Ants, Ants, Ants, Ants, Ants,
Everywhere, Everywhere, 
EVERYWHERE!

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Comments: Dedicated to my Baltimore kitchen, during a wet and rainy 2018.  But I hope for a better 2019.  FEEDBACK WELCOME.

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Susan Jeavons October 23, 2019 at 11:17 AM Those pesky ants! Cute poem! Try putting a line of salt where ever you see them coming in. It worked for me. Blessings, Susan

Caren Krutsinger March 22, 2019 at 6:25 AM I love the way you have made me remember the parade of ants and how they are so everywhere at the same time. Noel Flater March 22, 2019 at 6:31 AM Caren, Last summer was the dance of the ants, the only thing that saved me was winter.

Panagiota Romios March 22, 2019 at 5:59 AM Hi Noel! How goes it? Like the rhythmical sense of your poem. And which one of us at sometime, have not been besieged by them? Ugh? Panagiota Noel Flater March 22, 2019 at 5:28 PM Panagiota, Thanks, I picture the repetition as Ants on the move. They're coming for you, us, everyone, Everywhere!