Sudharsan Srinivasan Poet Rhyme

Ants

An octet of  naughty ants
                             With imperceptible chants
                          From the bushy  green garden
                     Marching towards the sweets hidden
                          Stealing  and sharing  the food
                                   Like a robin-hood
                            Always moving  in a chain
                                   Like a long train
                                Is  a treat to watch
                          Which no creature can match
                        Standing  and facing the barrier
                                  Like brave warrior
                          In their short life of existence
                          Showing  tons of resistance
                        And living  in a perfect harmony
                      For them every day is a ceremony.

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Beata Agustin October 1, 2024 at 9:48 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A December 31, 2015 at 9:40 PM Happy new year.

Kenisha Shines July 21, 2013 at 4:44 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup,enjoyed reading your work.

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2013 at 11:41 PM Hi Sudharsan, , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Skat A July 18, 2013 at 7:35 PM Sudharsan, lol, thought I was the only one who owned an ANT poem :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2013 at 10:51 AM - This is a very well written poem, lovely for children. - You write well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2013 at 11:04 AM - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)