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Ants

An octet of naughty ants With imperceptible chants From the bushy green garden Marching towards the sweets hidden Stealing and sharing the food Like a robin-hood Always moving in a chain Like a long train Is a treat to watch Which no creature can match Standing and facing the barrier Like brave warrior In their short life of existence Showing tons of resistance And living in a perfect harmony For them every day is a ceremony.

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Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 9:40:00 PM

Happy new year.

Kenisha Shines

Date: 7/21/2013 4:44:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup,enjoyed reading your work.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2013 11:41:00 PM

Hi Sudharsan, , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 7:35:00 PM

Sudharsan, lol, thought I was the only one who owned an ANT poem :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2013 10:51:00 AM

- This is a very well written poem, lovely for children. - You write well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/18/2013 11:04:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)