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Antonyms Love and Hate

Darkness, light , up, and down, all are opposites polar. But one can't exist without the other, like sun can't exist without the moon solar. Love can't exist without hate, up can't with down. I was destined to love you, it was fate. When I'm with you, I'm up, but when I'm not, I'm on the ground. You and I are opposites, but you're one I can't rate, and when I hear your voice it's the sweetest sound. Like the truth, you don't know what it is until you lie. You don't know what life is until you almost die. Just like you don't know what calm is until you cry. When you leave me I'm down and depressed with a sigh, So depressed that I only go to sleep at night when i cry. Because of you when I meet someone I no longer say goodbye. I only say hope to see you again sometime. I know every poem doesn't have to rhyme. But I take the time, for you, to make this poem rhyme. Just to let you that I'm Dedicated to make your life the best. So just take a rest, knowing you are the best. And i will never make you seem less, than what you really are. Because baby you are like a shooting star. That I wished on and my wish became true. And when my wish bacame true my wish turned into you. Because you are like a heavenly body, celestial. I need you so much in my life you are essential. But also because of love hate exists. There's so much wrong with this world I can make long lists. But here are just two of millions of things wrong with this world. One is blood and gore The other is closing your heart's door, and not expressing your feelings, these I cannot ignore. So open your heart's door and let love in. If you do this, the world will change so fast your head would spin. Blood and gore is where no one wins. Guns come out so fast when a fight begins. If people turn to God, He can save you from these sins. But as long as I have your love in my heart, If I fall, I'll just get up again. Dark can't exist without light, it's inevitable. But take in my message like it is deliciously edible. My message is that opposites exist, there are antonyms. But we as opposites must live together in harmony, just don't stacking sins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 8:25:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jordan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2011 12:33:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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