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anticipation zipping upwards splendidly -- explosions galore

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Date: 7/3/2010 6:36:00 AM
please poet friend no capitalization and indicate the cutting line (line 2) by placing either ... or -- at the end of line 2 all else is fine! Thanks for taking the haiku lessons with us!
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Date: 6/30/2010 8:29:00 PM
good one, good luck in the contest
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