Anticipation

anticipation
zipping upwards splendidly --
explosions galore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:36 AM
please poet friend no capitalization and indicate the cutting line (line 2) by placing either ... or -- at the end of line 2 all else is fine! Thanks for taking the haiku lessons with us!
Roberts Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:29 PM
good one, good luck in the contest
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