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Anthrax

.     VAMPIRE  FOAM

fresh mist in one step 
gone before day breaks out sun 
blood drain from wrong cow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 1:37:00 AM

One bite :-)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:28:00 PM

You know that I could see this happening. Thanks for your kind remarks. regards, Gerard

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/15/2011 5:21:00 AM

Excellent write my dear... Queen of Haiku!!! luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 10:01:00 PM

I don't know much about anthrax, Hathor. But this reads pretty cool.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/9/2011 9:28:00 AM

Yes, dear friend, anthrax is just terrible. Did you know that on island of Great Britain is still off limits due to anthrax spores yet dormant there (a relict of WW II)...Well written!....Gert

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/1/2011 8:09:00 PM

A beauiful haiku,Hathor.I really enjoyed it

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2010 7:54:00 PM

Linra, Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2010 12:13:00 PM

Interesting topic...I saw something on tv the other day about Anthrax and how Rhinos are killed every so often because of these spores...This was a very different topic to read about today..Delight was what I felt when I read your comments about my work A Physical Therapist..My husband just had to have total knee joint replacement..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2010 6:36:00 AM

very interesting Haiku, awesome. Harry

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/30/2010 3:28:00 AM

Hathor - c c crisp foam ......... interesting cow...........gud one thnx for viewing my work' "Rain-Liquid Angel" and leaving big vow ! Luv/Best wishes .......Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2010 10:13:00 PM

Interesting piece, Hathor. Ghoulish! But that is cool. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/27/2010 10:21:00 AM

Hathor you said so much in just a few lines.. I love your 2nd line.. WN

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/27/2010 9:14:00 AM

oooh, hathor... goosepimples with your grating, lovely oiece.. i like!! .. thanks for passing by my page with your encouraging words... huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/27/2010 8:20:00 AM

Nice pen picture you have penned on Anthrax, Hathor

David Smalling

Date: 12/27/2010 8:05:00 AM

I love the mystery of the lines, the brevity used as a symbol of the unknown. I like the hidden biographics ... how a little said speaks volume. Good write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2010 7:41:00 AM

cool,, hauik,,, sure enjoyed,,, Hathor,,, have a nice mad cow day lol,,.p.d.

Anthrax

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