Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Anthology Stanzas

*First stanza below is not mine, but the other two are meant to be 
added to it along with other stanzas (if our stanzas get chosen by the sponsor)

*Woven are these pages in poetic verse,
With bare threads of our deepest feelings,
You will find laughter, tears and remorse,
and words of wisdom, prayer and healings.

Sorrows drip from our pens so poignantly.
Elegantly too our joys are expressed.
We can even imagine things we cannot see.
With imagery, our loveliest thoughts are dressed.

We write for we must, and our words pouring out
can never be stopped, for as our words surge -
like rivers to the ocean we flow; without doubt,
we are one and the same as together we merge.


April 27, 2020 
for Krish Radhakrishna's Poetry Anthology add your stanzas Poetry Contest

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Jenish Somadas May 3, 2020 at 12:15 AM we are one and the same as together we merge..wonderful expression of unity from a great poet..Congrats Andrea..

John Watt May 2, 2020 at 6:50 PM I especially enjoyed the words poignantly, elegantly, and imagine. All poetic elements to aspire to.

John Watt May 2, 2020 at 2:45 PM Congratulations, poetess friend! Such a lovely collection of poetic thoughts, beautifully inscribed.

Krish Radhakrishna May 2, 2020 at 1:29 PM “Sorrows drip from our pen so poignantly” Congrats on your win! I will incorporate this in my final anthology. The first stanza is superb! Can’t expect anything less from you Andrea!

Timothy Hicks May 1, 2020 at 12:16 AM It's a wonderful feeling to elaborate on what another poet has started ... who knows where the trail of thought may lead? You have the makings of a fine contender with this write.

Caren Krutsinger April 29, 2020 at 6:41 AM I truly would have never guessed all three were not written by the same artist.

JC Brul April 29, 2020 at 1:19 AM Simple amazing dear poet Andrea. The merging of all three stanzas like merging of ingredients that make a fantastic recipe. Well done!

Richard Lamoureux April 28, 2020 at 1:20 PM Beautiful and seamless Andrea. I expect this will be chosen. Blessings Rick.

Joseph May April 28, 2020 at 12:50 PM Beautiful verse Andrea, love the last stanza, best wishes..

Harry Horsman April 28, 2020 at 8:28 AM Wow, brilliant, reminds me so much of your wonderful sonnets, Andrea..

Judy Ball April 28, 2020 at 7:07 AM Lovely Andrea. Hope it winds. God Bless, JB

Connie Marcum Wong April 28, 2020 at 3:06 AM This is really lovely Andrea. Best of luck having it in the anthology. Your two stanzas blend really well with the first. xxoo

Jenish Somadas April 28, 2020 at 12:05 AM like rivers to the ocean we flow; without doubt..Beautiful lines.. Good luck in the contest Andrea..

Tom Cunningham April 27, 2020 at 5:06 PM Well written Andrea, we write about things we cannot see, our minds take us wherever we want to be. Tom