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Answering Your Query

The Summer Day by Mary Oliver "I do know how to pay attention, how to stroll through the fields… Tell me, what it is you plan to do with your one wild and precious life?” -------Answering Your Query------- Lost in wake of his untamed sleep Where dreaming is wholly detailed, Nicked choices are present to reap. His music lends lure in her heart While crooning in concert he charms, What precious wild dream to impart. ------------------------------------------ Form: Rhyme Written: 07/06/2016 Contest Name: Tell Me

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Date: 7/16/2016 10:13:00 AM
Loved the phrase untamed sleep! Leading to wild dream. Very nice!
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Jesse Day
Date: 7/16/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thanks - didn't hit the mark for the contest - oh well... Thank you for reading and your comments! Happy you liked it. Jesse

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