Answering Your Query

The Summer Day by Mary Oliver

"I do know how to pay attention,
how to stroll through the fields…
Tell me, what it is you plan to do
with your one wild and precious life?”


-------Answering Your Query-------

Lost in wake of his untamed sleep
Where dreaming is wholly detailed,
Nicked choices are present to reap.

His music lends lure in her heart
While crooning in concert he charms,
What precious wild dream to impart.

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Form: Rhyme
Written: 07/06/2016
Contest Name: Tell Me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Loved the phrase untamed sleep! Leading to wild dream. Very nice!
Day Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Thanks - didn't hit the mark for the contest - oh well... Thank you for reading and your comments! Happy you liked it. Jesse
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