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Answered Prayers

. breath of morning rain... a gentle benediction over fields of wheat Growing up in the country... a farming community worries over lack of rainfall ....a blessing is a good year of rain...

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 10:07:00 PM

Lovely, Carrie. Like a breath of fresh air.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2010 1:55:00 PM

I see congatulations on your haiku, a nice gift to after the ordeal,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2010 1:52:00 PM

First I will comment on your comment to my Edge walker, it was a real encouraging comment. I know i love messing with my poetry, I just felt as if i had to write the edge walker. Thank you for the notice. You are a spirit lifter here on the soup, no wonder why many consider you a favorite. Take care,..Sidney LeeAnn

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/22/2010 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations Carrie, better rain than hail. That's what has happened all around us! aguess we're lucky. I'd rather have your rain. Keep up the good work! RAY

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/22/2010 9:32:00 AM

Super congrats on your win with this dear Carrie :) & like the blessed rain, may God continue to shower you with His blessings! keep on writing these gems of poetry, you touch lives with it :) & I sure do appreciate those thoughts of sending some of your rain over here :) whew, it's hot! Hope you had a wonderful birthday, belated birthday hugs to you Carrie :), & that's really so great to share your birthday with 2 other special ladies here in the Soup :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 4:36:00 PM

I SEE how you won this one, WOWIE and congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2010 7:27:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on another number one .. I am on vacation till June 1st trying to catch up comments and congrats... enjoy another fine win..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Amy Green

Date: 5/19/2010 9:20:00 PM

Congrats! This is a really good Haiku, I really like the line, "a gentle benediction"... heck, I like the whole thing! Pieces together perfectly.

Rick Parise

Date: 5/19/2010 4:41:00 PM

You winner you , Loved this one Carrie~Congrats for WINNING (#1) my contest~Rick

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2010 8:32:00 AM

blessed poem this is,nature at its best. .i wish i lived in the country dear. .Charma

Brian Strand

Date: 5/19/2010 12:34:00 AM

Amen Carrie,very thoughful writing.Rgds Brian & Thank you for your kind words.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2010 7:35:00 PM

There are times when a good rain is most welcome and you added a spiritual quality in the second line that works nicely, Carrie. Good luck in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/18/2010 7:29:00 PM

Great Haiku, Carrie. If this is for the contest on the "rain", good luck, should do real well. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2010 6:30:00 PM

Meaningful expressions