L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Another Wintry Day

It’s too cold, so, I cannot go outside and play
Staring at a computer makes my eyes rheumy
My muse, apparently, has nothing to say
It’s too cold, so I cannot go outside and play,
I can hardly wait for another sunshiny day
I’m so tired of wintery days, dark and gloomy,
It’s too cold, so I cannot go outside and play
Staring at a computer makes my eyes rheumy. 

Written December 8, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger December 10, 2022 at 4:29 AM I am thrilled that you get to go outside and play tomorrow - and play and play and play! Happy vacation! L Milton Hankins December 10, 2022 at 8:25 AM Yes! I can hardly wait! The sun is trying its best here today, too.

Darlene De Beaulieu December 8, 2022 at 3:36 PM Hello Milton, Winter is just begging. We have a long way to go before Spring. Also winter never knows when to leave. So it could be a longer winter. Enjoy your evening my friend./ Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2022 at 10:12 AM Hello Milton, Your welcme. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene L Milton Hankins December 8, 2022 at 7:03 PM I think you are right about this, Darlene. Thanks for your read and your comment.

Tom Cunningham December 8, 2022 at 1:59 PM A shame the weather is against you Milton but experts reckon too much screen time doesn't do your eyes much good.. You're caught between the devil and the dark blue sea. Tom L Milton Hankins December 8, 2022 at 7:04 PM I am, indeed, Tom, but when I'm in my den, and it is too disagreeable to go outside, I'm at the computer. Way too much, I'm afraid. My eyes have trouble adjusting from here to there!