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Another time and Place I saw her home, so splendid sofa cushions all in place No messy crumb nor any spill, A tidy desk, a poet's quill Quiet order, each her space I mused "Oh someday, someday! My poet's heart will pour. My home shining and perfect, No handprints on the door! Quiet order in my place." The years passed by so quickly Shining is my floor Not a nary toy in sight No in n' out the door Quietly, I feel displaced I went to visit my old friend I knocked upon her door Another woman answered Poetess? Lived there no more Peeking out beside her, a Sweet and sticky little face The woman seemed quite eager To make a friend of me She said that she would ask me In, but her home was quite messy Startled, I could see myself In another time and space I knew she needed friendship At the door we talked a while I told her to come visit me, Then departed with a smile My address in her hand A smile on her face To my surprise, she came one day Her sweet tots by her side My clean front door was opened And, it was open wide She commented on the tidiness Softly touched curtains of lace She said "Your home is splendid! Your sofa cushions all in place! No crumb nor spill, no toy. A tidy desk, and poets quill? Perfect order, every space!" She mused "Oh someday, someday! My poet's heart will pour! My home shining and perfect, No handprints on the door! Quiet order in my place!" I answered, "Yes, too quickly." My gaze downcast toward the floor Then something funny caught my sight Handprints on my entry door Her tots had found my ink pad Their mom felt quite disgraced A heavy burden lifted Then I laughed until I cried "It's quite alright, no worries!" I wiped my happy tears and sighed I brought out tea and cookies For her kids and new friend Grace The years pass by too quickly Shining is loves gift Children are a blessing My friend my heart uplifts I'd rather enjoy happiness Children make a joy filled place! Life's a lot more than shiny floors Invite joy and friends Through those front doors!

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Date: 6/20/2021 10:14:00 AM
how nice...I sometimes get caught up with the "clean" thing...but I would accept the prints of anyone who visits. I love company. Thanks for the poem and reminder.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/22/2021 9:37:00 PM
Me too Virginia, I love having friends and family drop by for dinner, music, celebrations. We have a lot to celebrate and are always celebrating one holiday or another, birthdays, notable events, I love their company! Thanks for stopping by with your always uplifting comments. I love your 'visits' to my poems and am always encouraged by your kind words! <3
Date: 6/18/2021 10:16:00 PM
I could relate to this and completely agree. When my son was small my house was messy. Now it is orderly. Sometime when I see house with kids that is orderly, it surprises me, no toys, books, clothes lying here and there, no marks in walls and doors... They must be strict surely or cleaning non stop. Wonderful write friend!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/18/2021 11:45:00 PM
Oh yes, I feel the same way...too tidy may be too strict. My mom's house was tidy to a capital T but I didn't have a very joyful time of it...she said she had "Eyes in the back of her head." She saw every single mess and said "Cleanliness is next to Godliness!" BTW I was surprised that isn't in the Bible, lol! I'm not talking about a filthy total wreck of course, that's not good at all, but a bit messy is a lot normal with busy happy little kids!
Date: 6/18/2021 10:47:00 AM
Ah, they do indeed my friend, I have not been blessed with grand kids, but I do appreciate their love and smile. Thank you for sharing this tender poem dear friend, keep well :)
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/18/2021 3:37:00 PM
I have grandkids, and they are a joy. Children are the joy of the present, the hope of the future. Thank you for stopping by <3
Date: 6/18/2021 4:56:00 AM
This is a beautiful story, BJ of friendship and two souls longing for it. Well done!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/18/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! Sometimes I think we allow limits on our friendships through our differences in age, or maybe places of worship, whatever...., there seems to be invisible walls that we let get in our way. Sometimes fate has a way of placing doors through those walls for us! Friends are a wonderful blessing <3 The young bless the old, and vice versa!

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