Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Prose Poetry

Another Scary Story

You make your move
Up the stairs
a cool breeze
Makes you flare

You shiver
like a duck on a river

You stay still
Stoned for death
White as a ghost
Fleet like a pest

You race
Like a cow flowing on the upper side of space

You make your move
Down the stairs
A cool breeze
Leaves the air

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2009 at 11:41 AM Thank you for entering my contest Sajdah. Love, Carol

Hyle Chu August 2, 2009 at 3:15 PM Freaky.

Jay Loveless July 27, 2009 at 6:03 PM nice one =)

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo July 24, 2009 at 7:36 AM A poem like no other ive read in awhile once is a good thing great job love the rhyme keep it up

Edward Orozco July 23, 2009 at 10:35 PM Def. Scary.... good write- eddie

Gareth Heslop July 19, 2009 at 2:53 PM thanks for your comments about my poem, nice to hear somebody understands them. do like this one.

July 18, 2009 at 2:50 PM Sounds scary to me. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire July 18, 2009 at 1:28 PM Must agree with Bob, Sajdah. That "cool breeze" is often associated with spiritual apparitions. Very nice write! Love, Carolyn