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Picture 3. for contest

Another Pail Of Water

A dog and a cat 
Sat on a porch 
Watching Jill water her plants 

Jill felt happy and swell 
Because the water from the well 
Made her flowers all rise up and dance 

They danced in the sun 
And had so much fun 
The colorful petals from roses 

Made the dog and the cat 
Both sneeze where they sat 
Because some petals were stuck to their noses
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Williams Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 11:59 PM
Very funny Charlie, perhaps the dog and cat were allergic to the pollen. Lol Hugs Maria
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:25 AM
You captured the scene well Charlie. Good luck in the contest, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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