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Picture 3. for contest

A dog and a cat Sat on a porch Watching Jill water her plants Jill felt happy and swell Because the water from the well Made her flowers all rise up and dance They danced in the sun And had so much fun The colorful petals from roses Made the dog and the cat Both sneeze where they sat Because some petals were stuck to their noses

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Date: 9/15/2024 11:59:00 PM
Very funny Charlie, perhaps the dog and cat were allergic to the pollen. Lol Hugs Maria
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Date: 9/4/2024 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 8/25/2024 8:25:00 AM
You captured the scene well Charlie. Good luck in the contest, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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