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Another gardening rhyme

I wish I had the energy to do my garden proud. But my poor back is groaning It is groaning very loud. I have some great intentions to spend an afternoon digging in the garden. But they evaporate real soon. In another life, not so very long ago I could spend all day in the garden I would dig and rake and hoe I’d plant out all the seedlings and prune the roses rare Water all the vegetables and treat them all with care But now, I’m very sad to say, those days are left behind The thing about getting old, it isn’t very kind But not to worry, you know what, I’ll get some gardening guys Then they’ll do all heavy work, and I’ll just supervise.

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Date: 2/25/2025 2:49:00 PM
I love the lighthearted and relatable tone of this poem! It captures the bittersweet reality of aging with humor and warmth. The rhyme scheme flows smoothly, and the contrast between past energy and present limitations is both nostalgic and amusing. The ending is especially fun--turning a challenge into a clever solution.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/26/2025 4:22:00 AM
Thank you Alesia, yes old age comes with its limitations but no use complaining. It can be frustrating to be unable to do things that were no problem a short tine ago. But we mustn’t lose our sense of humour. Cheers
Date: 2/20/2025 11:15:00 PM
What old age brings ! Superb !
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/21/2025 3:27:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Akham. The secret is don’t let it get you down. lol cheers
Date: 2/19/2025 5:44:00 AM
Love the final line of this poem! Yes, keep the garden, keep being the boss and enjoy!
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/21/2025 3:30:00 AM
Many thanks DD. Yes old age has its drawbacks but also its advantages. I do love gardens. I find them very therapeutic. Take care .

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