Another gardening rhyme


I wish I had the energy to do my garden proud.
But my poor back is groaning It is groaning very loud. 
I have some great intentions to spend an afternoon 
digging in the garden. But they evaporate real soon.
In another life, not so very long ago
I could spend all day in the garden
I would dig and rake and hoe
I’d plant out all the seedlings and prune the roses rare
Water all the vegetables and treat them all with care
But now, I’m very sad to say, those days are left behind
The thing about getting old, it isn’t very kind
But not to worry, you know what, I’ll get some gardening guys
Then they’ll do all heavy work, and I’ll just supervise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 2/25/2025 2:49:00 PM
I love the lighthearted and relatable tone of this poem! It captures the bittersweet reality of aging with humor and warmth. The rhyme scheme flows smoothly, and the contrast between past energy and present limitations is both nostalgic and amusing. The ending is especially fun--turning a challenge into a clever solution.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/26/2025 4:22:00 AM
Thank you Alesia, yes old age comes with its limitations but no use complaining. It can be frustrating to be unable to do things that were no problem a short tine ago. But we mustn’t lose our sense of humour. Cheers
Date: 2/20/2025 11:15:00 PM
What old age brings ! Superb !
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/21/2025 3:27:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Akham. The secret is don’t let it get you down. lol cheers
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