Another Deadly Sin

Jealousy in senior citizens
Is an ugly thing
It’s childish, it’s petty,
It has a negative ring
For elderly women, make no mistake
In certain surroundings
There’s quite an outbreak
And don’t they look silly
With their petulant smiles
As they pose and they preen
Like noxious reptiles!
The venom they spew, why, it’s unladylike
Overheard was this gentleman:
“Girl, take a hike!”
We don’t want you around,
Say the popular guys
But they simply can’t help it
They draw them like flies
So here is a warning, a word to the wise
If old ladies don’t watch it
They may recognize
That they haven’t a clue
How to compete for the prize.
Let them be jealous, let them talk trash
They only look foolish
But they’re due for a crash
‘Cause nobody likes them
We think they’re absurd
Their ugliest nature
Is more than inferred
Drop the act, ladies, give it a rest
The men are all saying
You’re the worst kind of pest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/21/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, ladies, for your kind comments. I truly appreciate you! Ellen
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Date: 4/26/2023 12:30:00 PM
it's quite funny, isn't it? Women try to compete with each other apparently at all ages. LOL
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Date: 3/16/2023 12:52:00 AM
such penetrating portrait of society, this is acerb, irrevocable, "violent" and finally wonderful to read, i adore yann
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