Another Brother

Say so sadness must reveal Who saw a brother falling fast? The depth of loss for all so real Mind departure liquor blast The finest glider in the air One glitch devolve to nullify Fine life of labor flying fair Shards remain of years gone by All bottle-torn disheveled worn One perfect flight crash-landed Slim hope for greener pasture born Locked out a mind descended
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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July 10, 2020 at 10:26 AM
GrEaT poem, Fred!! Very thought-provoking. Love the muse meter in which your thought moves. You are a syllable savant and vowel visionary. Your keen insight help elevate my understanding of life. May you Poetry Soup bowl always be full. Love and more love always.
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