ANOMIE

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04/18/24

No. 1305

Second place

Contest by Brian Strand.

           

          Sense of anomie 
          disturbs me !
           Not feeling free
            to get entry
            in modern set up !
             Better to give up.
              
              Sitting indolent,
              instead to lament.
             Neither to rectify,
             nor trying to modify !
             Or to spot and identify !
             Not accustomed to spotify.
              
             Moral values ! Universal
             So far followed ! Traditional.
              Now on deterioration 
              among new generation.
         
             Cause of irritation to analyse :
             Outlook of society to modernise .
                Searching for my enemy,
                sinking in abyss of anomie.

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Hiba Junaid

Date: 5/7/2024 6:41:00 AM

this unique style of writing really pulled me in - good job. A well deserved win. Much Blessings - Hiba.