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This poem, text only, is included in my latest Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  ISBN13: 9781800743342 published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

Anniversary of a Blind Date

You could have called it a blind date,
The manner in which we first met,
But one that was truly desired,
Not one made for a stupid bet.

A year has now passed since that day,
My life then so completely changed,
When my future was realigned
And not just merely rearranged. 

With the little sight I had left
I really liked what I first saw
But my social skills were lacking
And my emotions were red-raw.

She saw through my anxieties; 
The pain I had coped with for years,
She seemed to sense the imprint left,
By many invisible tears.

Empathy was her strongest suit,
That was obvious right away,
Her bright sunny manner ensured,
We had an enjoyable day.

It’s strange how two can so quickly
Be bonded and then become one,
And all seeming as natural 
As the rising of the dawn sun.

With the little sight I had left,
I really liked what I first saw,
And I knew the feeling was mutual,
When she nuzzled me with her nose
And then offered me her paw …
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Seeker Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 12:43 AM
Beautiful!
Blake Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 11:23 PM
Thank you ~ Clive :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Quite a surprise ending.
Blake Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 11:08 PM
Hi Victor, Glad to hear the ending surprised you, thanks for commenting ~ Clive :)
Kalita Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Deep and strong!
Blake Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 11:06 PM
Hi Silpika, Thank you for these comments ~ Clive :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Hello Clive Blake, you had me going thinking something else. i do lie the ending of this poem. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Hello Blake, yes the poem di d start in the wrong footing. I enjoyed this poem. I will you enjoy your day to. Clive my friend. enjoy your day. Darlene
Blake Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:26 PM
Hi Darlene, great to hear that the start of the poem succeeded in wrong footing you, and that you liked the ending. Thanks also for taking the time to comment. You enjoy your day also, my friend ~ Clive :)
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