Annabel

Alone she waits for him
Alive or dead she waits
Anxious down to her soul
As the war ebbs and flows
All thoughts of victory
Any bright tomorrows
Arouse most painful dread



August, 2016
For Contest Pleiades
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:47 PM
A sad story in so few words. Congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Thank you, Jan
Merryman Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Larry, congrats on a well written Pleiades! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!
Bradfield Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:39 PM
My pleasure, Kim...thanks for the ranking!..Larry
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:07 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Larry - Great, written for Annabell - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise..Larry
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:24 AM
a little on the Poe Side!! Congrats for your win.
Bradfield Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Andrea..much appreciated..Larry
Smith Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Would expect no less a placement for one more of your epic efforts, congratulations Larry...
Bradfield Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Thanks my friend! You're very kind..Larry
Haight Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Nicely done, Larry. A sad story you've delivered in so few words and lines. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Bradfield Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Thank you, Sandra
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