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Anna and the French Kiss

gathering her long dress in both hands, she ran across her father’s green fields, to the shore lines and its golden sands, to his warm embrace, kisses she yields. that moment of young love, his warm kiss, restored her faith in life gone amiss, hardships of home with a drunken dad, and loss of loving mum she once had. her hurried foot prints through trampled grass, spoke of eagerness of this young lass, to meet the person who breathed her joy, her face pink with happiness, some coy. he waited there in his checkered shirt, smile on face, shoes without speck of dirt, caught her as she jumped into his arms, covered her face with kisses in swarm! setting Sun paid tribute to their love, crimson rays going golden above, swirl of evening breeze from spring meadow, as the two locked their lips and shadows! a kiss is synchrony of two hearts, when souls yearn and cannot be apart, in that love moment, Anna bloomed again, away from past, life she would regain!
Written 02/September/2021 9 syllables each line Mystic Rose Rose sponsored Anna and the French kiss contest

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Date: 9/16/2021 2:10:00 AM
A fav from me, KRish! admire your poetic skills, Wonderfully done! Fantastic,, Panagiota
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/16/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thanks So much Pangie! This one was N/A in the contest! but so glad my friends liked it!
Date: 9/7/2021 5:55:00 AM
Really enjoyed this poem about passionate love, Krish. You wrote a lovely poem - touches my heart. BW ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/7/2021 8:10:00 AM
Mala, delighted and thanks! I am pleased you like it!:)
Date: 9/4/2021 9:33:00 AM
Excellent! It brings back my youth!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/4/2021 9:47:00 AM
Thanks David! Many similar moments for those who have been in love!
Date: 9/3/2021 11:33:00 AM
Exceptional write, Krish. I especially loved your choice of rhymes. Nice flow. Good work! Good luck in the contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/3/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Milton. So pleased you like it!:) Kind regards!
Date: 9/3/2021 11:31:00 AM
Hello Krish, I can feel the passion of this poem as I read it. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2021 4:12:00 PM
Hello Krish, yes that is the way it is with young love. blessings my friend.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/3/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Darlene! young love is always hurried and less worried!!

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