Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Animal Cruelty

I watched a shocking video today,
It’s an example of animal cruelty,
A variety of them killed without mercy,
Skinned to the bones while it breathing heavily.

A heart with no soul for doing this activity,
They are so scared shouting for their last day,
Pool of blood pouring to the ground of hell,
Small voices of dying animals, furs will sell.

The savaged men tossed them to the side,
A mountain of bloody creatures for sacrifice,
Looking at them begging to stop this inhumane act,
It breaks my heart and tears flowing down in fact.

The best thing we can do is to pray,
Show our love to animals every day,
Be vigilant, be concern,  and do your share,
They are God’s creation, please show your care.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DE56fAD3HyE
This is the link

February 28, 2013

6th Place Winner
For PD's Contest
September 25, 2013

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Farhana Akter May 19, 2014 at 12:32 PM Touchy

Sandra Adams September 26, 2013 at 4:34 PM so sad but true that people are like this and I think there should be stricter punishment for animal cruelty...congrats on your win :)

Danesh Morgan September 26, 2013 at 4:07 AM sad and true Congrats. Morgan

Dr.Ram Mehta September 26, 2013 at 12:48 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Maria

Skat A September 25, 2013 at 9:13 PM Maria, your poem is awesome, Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A September 25, 2013 at 5:17 PM Hi Maria, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my Any Poem Goes contest. Exactly what I was looking for, SIMPLE-PLEASING & BEAUTIFUL- teasing the reader with such awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Animal Cruelty " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15953&PoetID=18720 **LINDA

Lucilla Carrillo March 3, 2013 at 9:02 AM Maria; you are so right. People that do this type of things - have no heart. The litte animals have no way of defending themselves. It is our job to protect them. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

Sara Kendrick March 2, 2013 at 10:39 AM It is one thing to have to have a meal or meals but another entirely when only use a small part of the animal and let the animal suffer so unnecessarily..Great work that is emotive and expressive..Sara

Len Gasun March 2, 2013 at 10:16 AM Hello my very dear friend Maria! So glad to read your message and thank you soooo much! Again, I congratulate you with my whole heart in all the fantastic wins you'd recently earned. I am so proud of you too. Well, you take care always my dear and enjoy your vacation! We, too will be out after a week. We'll have a school tour out of country again next next week. Have a safe and enjoyable trip and vacation. God bless you always! love, big sweetest hugs and kisses, Leonora

Harry Horsman March 2, 2013 at 4:41 AM needed to be written, this Maria, glad i read this, we need to stand together against these acts of cruelty

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2013 at 8:07 AM I would not be able to even watch this. A person who would do this, is the kind of person who would resort to cannibalism if he were starving. Not decent person to live on the face of the earth.

Michael Dom March 1, 2013 at 6:38 AM You must feel very strongly about animal cruelty. The result - a strong rhyme, couplets in quatrain. And very concise write. Nice work. :-) cheers!

Tim Ryerson February 28, 2013 at 4:51 PM Makes me want to be a vegetarian, Maria...I will surely watch the video (if I have the stomach for it) A stunning, shocking and very compelling poem - Tim

Len Gasun February 28, 2013 at 9:28 AM So sad to hear about some people who are so cruel with animals or even their pets my dear friend! I am an animal lover and I pity those animals being inflicted. I'll go and check the link perhaps on my free time this wk end. Thank you so much for sharing this great write of yours and many congrats on your consecutive wins my friend. I'm so sorry if I can't stay long here tonight coz I'm still so bz. Tcare and good luck always! love much, Leonora Bukang Liwayway February 28, 2013 at 9:41 AM I understand my dear friend if your busy..thanks for your comments..God bless you always. :)