Sara Chansarkar Poet Rhyme

Animal Antics

Found two pretty white spotted deer
Grazing blissfully in the woods
I approached on tiptoe, so careful
But, staring straight at me they stood

I walk around this lovely pond
Family of geese-mom, pop and goslings
Jump right in. Flaunting-looking at me
And wait, do I see them smiling?

Clinging to my car window rim
Here’s the yellow lady butterfly
Sorry! It must be singeing your feet
I approach close, but it does not fly

I am now starting to think
These animals, innocent as they look
Are charming me to take their pictures
And make them famous on Facebook

Written on 09/04/2016
Contest:Animal Antics by Shadow Hamilton

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Joseph May September 15, 2016 at 4:39 PM Love the ending Sara...nicely penned..

Janice Canerdy September 7, 2016 at 12:42 PM A 7 for this truly delightful poem, Sara! Janice Sara Chansarkar September 8, 2016 at 2:03 PM Thanks Janice:)

Winged Warrior September 7, 2016 at 9:23 AM Everyone wants a chance at fame...even animals and insects...great funny write Sara...god bless...^WW^ Sara Chansarkar September 8, 2016 at 2:03 PM Thanks Winged,true that!

Jan Allison September 5, 2016 at 8:45 AM Really cute poem Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Sara Chansarkar September 8, 2016 at 2:02 PM Thanks Jan, they are growing smarter each day:)

Beautiful Scars September 4, 2016 at 2:16 PM sooo cute Sara!! Shadow will love this! good luck sweet Sara :)-luloo Sara Chansarkar September 8, 2016 at 2:02 PM Thanks dear Laura:)

Daniel Turner September 4, 2016 at 1:37 PM Really a fun read, Sara. I enjoyed it a lot. You left me smiling:) Sara Chansarkar September 8, 2016 at 2:01 PM Thanks Daniel:)glad you like it

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2016 at 12:38 PM haha, what a cool ending this has, Sara. Love it. Sara Chansarkar September 8, 2016 at 2:01 PM Thanks Andrea and this is the truth!