Angry Lava

Unmet expectations hit hard
they damage what they would,
unkept promises are like blows 
they strike where hope grows,
unkind words are harsh slashes,
they rip through, the mind crashes.

The mind becomes the fire of the wild 
Uncontrolled, it boils the blood of pride  
as it flares, burns the gentle patience, 
undowsed, it singes the sane senses,
untamed, it blazes relationship chords,
so long preserved to build the bonds.

The smoke billows up thick and intense
upset conscience trips losing its balance,
heated vile breath is clouded by the ashes
the patient facade of restraint they deface.

The flame flows in the inflated veins
no more carriers of blue blood within,
the heart turns into a volcanic inferno
erupting fiery lava called anger to flow.

November 8, 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations Subimal. Very well done :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 3:25 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Barden Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 4:56 AM
Beautiful write, Subimal - I love the phrasing and imagery ... congrats on your well-earned win, friend. Blessings! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 3:25 AM
Thank you, Greg. I value your comments.
R. V. Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:31 AM
Congrats, Subimal! It's volcanic indeed:-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:41 AM
Thank you, Ram.
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal. Well done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 12:29 AM
Thank you, Line for your appreciation.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 12:29 AM
Thank you, Line for your appreciation.
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